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This is a vast improvment. It is visually interesting and suspenseful. Most of it plays out much like a music video in the sense that it has little to no story progression throughout most of the movie, but I can easily enjoy that.
I liked the ending, it reminded me somewhat of the ending from...
Then it was most successful. And do not worry, I won't be returning to animation any time soon. After all I have the challenging task of editing and composing soundtrack for The Flesh Eating Horrors to do.
Hello there.
I know you did not ask for opinions on this film, but I find constructive critisism the best way to improve.
I will not comment on the actors as I can see they are young and inexperienced, and over all they're not doing half a bad job, but they can at time be somewhat hard to...
This is an experimental and minimalistic animation with a surreal story based around life and death of various things.
It is my first attempt at animation and I would love to get some feedback, though keep in mind that the minimalistic choppy animation is a stylistic choice...
Not bad at all. It looks good, got some really nice shots going. The only thing that I might try to work abit on is the delivery of the comedic lines. The actors seem a bit disinterested at times. Though all over good work.
I'll definitly keep this in mind when writing the sequels, but I do hope it will come forth as more comedic in the full film. I'll also try to compose something lighter and more "fun" for the soundtrack, the serious music might at times take away some of the sillyness so a more upbeat theme is...
I could perhaps have edited it a bit faster, but I was trying my best to fill up the soundtrack. The composition isn't mine so I do not have the stems to edit it.
And I'm struggeling to find annother film that plays in this comedic way. I guess the closest might be Bad Taste. Though what I am...