Yes this - I'd certainly work in a photo of a woman, and if you can incorporate a photo of someone (male or female) who is Asian, Middle Eastern, Hispanic, whatever, I think that would be good.
I like it, especially the cookie reward :)
I've been waiting to the point where I'm sufficiently prepared to be depressed & discouraged before watching this, but thanks for the reminder that I really do want to do so.
I know a lot of people who have successfully used Airbnb to find locations.
When I shot my second feature, we spent 2 weeks on location in Ocean County, NJ. We rented a cluster of condos that are usually used as vacation rentals but, because it was off-season, we were able to rent them pretty...
I think it's good, although you might consider tweaking the very end slightly.
If it were me, I'd give Nic the last word, perhaps "screw you" or something similar. But that's just a slight quibble - I like it and look forward to seeing it when you're done.