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    critique [FEEDBACK] Super Salaam! | Drama, Comedy | 103 Pages.

    It's a explained later on. Page 11 actually! If you want to know why, you'll have to keep reading ahahha
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    critique [FEEDBACK] Super Salaam! | Drama, Comedy | 103 Pages.

    Okay! I'm used to using Reddit, they always ask for the link! Here's my script in PDF. I use CELTX, and because I don't pay it doesn't allow me to cut things short...
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    critique [FEEDBACK] Super Salaam! | Drama, Comedy | 103 Pages.

    Hi. I've been working on this script for a few moths now. It's my first script ever, so I'm sure it needs a lot of work. Please feel free to tell me how to improve- be constructive. Logline; When a backbiter street kid from Mumbai meets a sarcastic British man in a cafe, memories from his past...
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