Recent content by Keekee

Thanks those are actually really valuable insight. I have a question about the ghost tho. Is it too cliché? All my film school teachers keep telling me it's not creative enough. The ghost is grayscale B&W while everything around him is in color. What else can I do to show he is a ghost in a...

Hi there again. I have and many changes and here it is again shorter.

Wow thank you so much. You're right I keep repeating myself and the short could end up way earlier. The final cemetery scene could be removed as some people have told me. I just wanted to end with this final scene on the couch with flowers around them in the living room. Dialogue needs indeed to...

Hello everyone. Hope you are doing great. I would like to ask any of you if you could give some feedback and pointers on my script. I am shooting my last year film school thesis film and after a few tutoring sessions with my professors about my script I am questioning my ability to tell a story...

That is a really good idea! Thank you. And for the fly Tamu turned William into it by accident as he tried not to get killed by him as he is a violent person. So Trump being annoyed by the fly kills it. And yes Trump was supposed to appear sooner so you have a good point. I'll rework on that...

Hello everyone. I am planning on shooting a short film this year and would love your input on my script. A comedic approach to the afterlife. Logline: When a narcissistic businessman dies and meets God's personal secretary, he must decide on his reincarnation option but that will not be an easy...

Hello everyone. I would like to introduce myself. My name's Keerian but please call me Keekee. I'm a French film student currently studying in Paris in an international film & television school. I have written many shorts and directed several mini-short films. As I am arriving at the end of my...