Awesome! Believe it or not guys, this advice has been really helpful. I'm going to give the editing another pass and incorporate some of these suggestions.
With the Acton/Fight scenes I'll just have to do better next time.
With regard to the Gun vs Fist, that was the joke, they have all...
Good observations, I thought the open was slow too, and this was my first time to do fight scenes. I learned a lot. Thanks for the comments. Good observations.
I'm new here, and this is one of my first shorts, have a look. Constructive Criticism is always welcome by me.
http://youtu.be/VGsW0IWRtEI
Thanks for watching!
A well executed zoom is difficult to achieve and requires practice. With some lenses it's easier than others. And it requires a lot of practice to get right.
Do it wrong, and it will be very distracting, and won't help your scene.