I agree with you, and that's why it's not present in my script or synopsis. However, if you got that from reading my synopsis, then that leads me to believe that it's confusing and worth a re-write. Thanks!
Hey all. I was hoping I could get some help on my logline. I've posted my synopsis as well for reference. Any help on either would be great! I'm too close to the script. Thanks!
LOGLINE:
An erratic flight-attendant sparks a mob war when she befriends a gangster's wife and uncovers the truth...