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    Crime Film - Logline and Synopsis help

    I agree with you, and that's why it's not present in my script or synopsis. However, if you got that from reading my synopsis, then that leads me to believe that it's confusing and worth a re-write. Thanks!
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    Crime Film - Logline and Synopsis help

    He's 28, I believe. Not that Astoria is small enough to know everyone, but worth a shot. I'm from Corvallis, myself.
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    Crime Film - Logline and Synopsis help

    Thanks, I'll try something different. On a side note, one of my writing buddies out here in LA grew up in Astoria. Maybe you know him - Kyle Rea.
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    Crime Film - Logline and Synopsis help

    Hey all. I was hoping I could get some help on my logline. I've posted my synopsis as well for reference. Any help on either would be great! I'm too close to the script. Thanks! LOGLINE: An erratic flight-attendant sparks a mob war when she befriends a gangster's wife and uncovers the truth...
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