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    misc Does anyone know of any 1960s/1970s gore/shlock film scripts online?

    Yeah. The reason I asked is because most of the films I'm after barely had scripts and no one thought to preserve them. The Crazies (the original) and Phibes are not in the league of the films I am after. Also, neither of those are shlock. But thanks for trying.
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    misc Does anyone know of any 1960s/1970s gore/shlock film scripts online?

    For example, Hershel Gordon Lewis's movies. I'd prefer scripts over transcripts, but even transcripts would work as I'm mostly interested in the "vibe". I know you can buy the script to Blood Feast as a book, but I'd prefer to not spend any money on this side quest.
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    logline Logline for a steampunk thriller

    I average about one script a month. I recently tried going logline first and it didn't work for me as I don't come up with stories that way. That whole fashionista steampunk irks me. When I think of steampunk the first things that come to mind is the novels, The Difference Engine, and 20,000...
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    logline Logline for a steampunk thriller

    How did you get indoctrinated from that? Or that the cult wants to wipe themselves out? Victoria is there because in earlier versions where I explicitly started the logline with "London 1887" people were confused by it. I think time and place matters when it's very different from our own, so...
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    logline Logline for a steampunk thriller

    Did you mean to say the logline needs more?
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    logline Logline for a steampunk thriller

    The movie is written. And of course the Queen is not the assassin. Did you mean to say the logline needs more?
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    logline Logline for a steampunk thriller

    Inflaming was bothering me. Inciting works much better. I'm trying "destroy the cult" which is perfectly workable, but I hate losing "destruction" as that is a delicious sounding word.
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    logline Logline for a steampunk thriller

    An assassin embroiled in a plot against Queen Victoria is psychically attacked by a mysterious cult, flooding her mind with memories from a madman and inflaming her to pursue the cult’s destruction. Thanks in advance for feedback.
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    logline Logline feedback for a drama, please and thank you

    My plan to write something from the logline out has been put on hold. Not only was it dragging, but I've got two scripts to get into shape before mid-December.
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    story It was all just a Dream

    One of my favorite dream sequence in film is in Apollo 13. Jim Lovell (Tom Hanks) dreams of landing on the Moon. In a film about how they don't get to land on the Moon, it is an eerily effective way of showing Lowell's ambition and giving the mission the importance it demands in the audience's mind.
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    logline The Sunset of the Last Logline

    Not really, but loglines should have titles. Right? Anyway... An inexperienced businessman is forced to choose between allowing his only investor to torture the startup's artificial intelligence product or hold to his ethics and risk losing the company.
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    logline Logline feedback for a drama, please and thank you

    Maybe? Not really. Just working the idea backwards, starting from the logline. It hasn't sunk its teeth into me yet, so we'll see. Like I stated in the initial post, this is a learning experience.
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    logline Logline feedback for a drama, please and thank you

    Well, yeah. That's why I'm doing this.
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    logline Logline feedback for a drama, please and thank you

    Still exploring to find that out.
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