Recent content by EddieNES

Finally got to the video. All good points. Time to build an audience with people willing to read a 400pg script. :lol:

Yes I do plan on it. That’s why I came here for the length and formatting questions. I wasn’t sure if I simple wrote too much or I was being too descriptive. I do appreciate all the feedback. I plan on watching the video as soon as I get a break from work.

I wrote about TMNT because I like them and I was disappointed in the last 2 movies. I wouldn’t exactly call this me being a copy cat. More, respecting the lore. Aren’t people hired to write all these superhero movies? I simple wrote a story about something I like. Apologies to everyone, but...

I was just interested in seeing his script with content I’m familiar with. But feel free to judge him, seems common here.

I think it works both ways. Snakes on a Plane: Campy comedy/horror pic made absolutely better throwing in Sam L Jackson and all his common antics. Ninja Turtles: Megan Fox and Stephen Amell both cast in major rolls that, imo, didn’t fit and screamed just trying to drawl in groups. But there...

I’ll read it.

Hello everyone, I’ve recently finished my first attempt at a screenplay and pretty much tripled what an average length should be. I was just wondering if someone could give some pointers on what exactly I’ve done wrong, as I feel this story could easily be done under 2 hours. I 100% don’t...

My name is Eddie. I joined to pretty much ease drop on random topics. I love to write and ended up with an almost 400pg script and I have no idea why; it feels like a 1.5-2hr film to me. I’m here to learn as much as I can since I’ve never had proper education. I’m EddieNES I’m almost every...