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    watch short film

    so this is a short film my friend made and he would love if you guys could shred it into pieces. thanks.
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    critique dissecting my short screenplay

    wow, thank you for spending the time to help me. this was extremely helpful. yes this is my first attempt at a dialogue driven screenplay and thanks to you and the others who have commented i learned more than i thought i would. thanks again.
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    critique dissecting my short screenplay

    thanks for the feedback! it means a lot :) it will definitely help me improve.
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    critique dissecting my short screenplay

    so i'm new to screenwriting and i just wrote a very short screenplay and to improve i would LOVE if you guys could shred it into pieces. thanks for your time. https://app.studiobinder.com/shared/5f9c439f52938b8d10b651c8
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    watch first short film

    thanks, it really means a lot
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    watch first short film

    huh that is weird...if you ever find the name of the short please let me know.
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    watch first short film

    thanks!!!
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    watch short film

    thanks for the advise i will definitely look into it :)
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    watch short film

    Hey guys this is a new short that i made. As always i would love feedback Thanks!!!
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    watch DC universe

    hey, i am curious if anyone knows if the DCU shows like doom patrol are going to HBO MAX or are they staying on DCU? thanks
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    hey

    thanks for the advise :)
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    watch first short film

    thanks for the advise it means a lot :)
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    watch first short film

    i would like constructive feedback and tell me what to improve in cinematography, lighting... i have no experience so feedback would be much appreciated thanks
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    hey

    hey, i am 15 and i just made my first ever short film i would like to join this forum to get constructive feedback on how to improve and grow thanks
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