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archived-videos The Other Me (my short horror film)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=foVp5d9hrIg

My first short film in over 4 years, just honing the skills again. Mistakes were made, but would rather make them here while costs are low and hopefully improve as a filmmaker.

Caveat: Didn't have access to actor so bribed my brother in law into doing it so I KNOW the acting should be better!

Any other feedback would be welcome.
 
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Great job!!! I liked it. I'm a sucker for horror anyways.

Personally, I would have liked to have seen some more "dramatic lighting" around the table, maybe. But that's just my opinion. I dig the overall idea though.
 
Great job!!! I liked it. I'm a sucker for horror anyways.

Personally, I would have liked to have seen some more "dramatic lighting" around the table, maybe. But that's just my opinion. I dig the overall idea though.

Thanks! That was the original plan, but had some space and lighting technical problems... lesson learnt!
 
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