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archived-videos 8 minute one take Fashion Film
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That was pretty impressive!
Well done on the one take. Inspires me to do a one-taker.
Better than the trailer 
But:
your story desciption: "a normal shoot", but I see no shoot.
Flashes and softboxes could have solved that.
And I don't think we see a real 'quest' or even a 'question being anwsered'. Actually the walking seems to begin without a reason.
All the time I was wondering where it would lead to, but except for reveal of the twins, I didn't see a quest end.
But you said it before: the story was not on the first place anyway.
An interesting video from a more experimental point of view.
A bit out of focus sometimes when there seem to be no real reason for it.
But:
your story desciption: "a normal shoot", but I see no shoot.
Flashes and softboxes could have solved that.
And I don't think we see a real 'quest' or even a 'question being anwsered'. Actually the walking seems to begin without a reason.
All the time I was wondering where it would lead to, but except for reveal of the twins, I didn't see a quest end.
But you said it before: the story was not on the first place anyway.
An interesting video from a more experimental point of view.
A bit out of focus sometimes when there seem to be no real reason for it.
Yeah, I was surprised at how strong some of the comments were haha. But I totally agree with you and it was one of the main things I was concerned with while drafting the concept.
It's all a learning curve but I definitely would have focused more on constructing a stronger story if a few logistics and elements were better organised.
That being said, it's getting decent feedback on Vimeo itself, a few magazines have agreed to feature it and even DJI want to feature it.
Thanks, it's gone through around 10 edits lol
Better than the trailer
But:
your story desciption: "a normal shoot", but I see no shoot.
Flashes and softboxes could have solved that.
And I don't think we see a real 'quest' or even a 'question being anwsered'. Actually the walking seems to begin without a reason.
All the time I was wondering where it would lead to, but except for reveal of the twins, I didn't see a quest end.
But you said it before: the story was not on the first place anyway.
An interesting video from a more experimental point of view.
A bit out of focus sometimes when there seem to be no real reason for it.
Yeah, again I agree I should have focused a lot more on the story.
