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Hey guys, been a while but I've got a few exciting details! First i've got several new films on the way and this is the first one of the list titled CLOCKED OUT.
It's about a secret division in police departments who find people from the future (non-educational reasons) who take advantage of lotteries, stocks etc. This was a fun 48 hour project and hope you all enjoy it!
More films will be released by next week, so look out for those. I'll be creating a production thread for my first feature on here soon too.

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12 Minutes
Viewer discretion is advised.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y3kSkCiTXaQ

SCREENSHOT
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(Shot on one 5D Mark II, edited on Premiere, After effects)

BEHIND THE SCENES
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Also if you missed it, DISCONNECTED intro (Full film on my channel) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ENXSPZONDK8
And the trailer for AS I AM to be released next week. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rc4dEghW_0w
LIGHT OF EDEN trailer http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mmwJyZQs1b8

Main Channel : http://www.youtube.com/fcrabbath
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WOW!!! 48 Hour film this is not! Looks like you guys spent months on it.

Only thing I could criticize is the focus at 7:24...in the laundromat when the kid has a hard time standing up. I kept wanting to look at the washer/dryer in the foreground when the action was on the kid. Nothing too terrible though and it really doesn't yank you out of the film.

Great job. You guys all deserve mad props yo!
 
Just watched it. You've still got the magic. Your directorial skills are strong. Beautifully shot, nicely paced, edited well.

The script is what bugs me in this one. It's very expository, and the dialogue is a little cookie-cutter, doesn't really feel genuine.

So, what's the feature? "Light of Eden"?

EDIT: Nevermind, just watched the trailer for "Light of Eden". That's different than the one I saw before. So, I take it this is a short that you're still in post on? Dude, you're a compositing genius. Those Egyptian-looking backdrops look very real.
 
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EDIT: Nevermind, just watched the trailer for "Light of Eden". That's different than the one I saw before. So, I take it this is a short that you're still in post on? Dude, you're a compositing genius. Those Egyptian-looking backdrops look very real.
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We actually have to refilm it due to my hard drive cashing hence the delay. :(
 
Good job. I kept on thinking of time cop and of Men in black while watching this. The audio could use some improvement with some ADR in some spots. It was a great job for the 48 hour contest.
 
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