Hello guys.
I was thinking about this and i'd like to know your opinions please, if it's worth writing or simply it just doesnt work, i'm in the wrong way.
I dont have the whole story, so i'll tell what i have.
It's a guy that buys an handheld cam online. When the product arrives by mail, he does a quick test to see if everything is ok and sees that there's a video already recorded in the camera. He then connects the cam (or just an SD card) to the computer and starts to see the video. It is a video of a girl (and i dont know yet the reasons) telling that she'll kill herself, unless the man to whom she sold the cam convince her that live worth living.
Then my idea was to show that the guy also bought the camera to record a video statement before end his life. In the end everything ends well, knowing that they have each other support.
I've turned the story around because my initial thought was that the content in that video could be a murder or something like that.
PS: Just by writing this, it all seems a bit stupid and nonsense.
Anyways, your opinions and help are more than welcome.
Thanks.
I was thinking about this and i'd like to know your opinions please, if it's worth writing or simply it just doesnt work, i'm in the wrong way.
I dont have the whole story, so i'll tell what i have.
It's a guy that buys an handheld cam online. When the product arrives by mail, he does a quick test to see if everything is ok and sees that there's a video already recorded in the camera. He then connects the cam (or just an SD card) to the computer and starts to see the video. It is a video of a girl (and i dont know yet the reasons) telling that she'll kill herself, unless the man to whom she sold the cam convince her that live worth living.
Then my idea was to show that the guy also bought the camera to record a video statement before end his life. In the end everything ends well, knowing that they have each other support.
I've turned the story around because my initial thought was that the content in that video could be a murder or something like that.
PS: Just by writing this, it all seems a bit stupid and nonsense.
Anyways, your opinions and help are more than welcome.
Thanks.