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watch Don't Believe A Thing I Say (Lyric Video)

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So I really enjoyed this album, and this song. I think the video could be improved -

Essentially, you took a lot of video at your local beach, created the text animation, and then layered them. If you're going to go about doing this, then it would help to move the text in each shot so it's readable. When the white text was going over white sand, it wasn't readable.

I think a better route in the future would be to go with some higher quality footage, or even some stock footage of beaches, reefs, etc. This felt a bit rushed, on an iPhone or something.


Hope the critique helps you in your film making!
 
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