Hey Indietalkers, I finished polishing up these two short scripts. They are very different. The first was transcribed from a short story I wrote, and the second was written directly as a script. The first took many hours and a lot of thought, the second I wrote in an hour. I am at a crossroads with my writing, so any feedback would be helpful. There is a lot more to say, but I don't want to muddy the waters.
A Penny Saved is a Penny Murdered:
https://docs.google.com/open?id=0B330vuSlEZmeMDM4ZTUwZGItMjFlMy00YzQ4LWIxMzctOTJjNzM0ZjcwZTBk
The Foursome:
https://docs.google.com/open?id=0B330vuSlEZmeMDdjNDBlNzktNjMzMS00ZDFkLTkzY2ItMWFiOWViMDQyMWM1
Thanks
A Penny Saved is a Penny Murdered:
https://docs.google.com/open?id=0B330vuSlEZmeMDM4ZTUwZGItMjFlMy00YzQ4LWIxMzctOTJjNzM0ZjcwZTBk
The Foursome:
https://docs.google.com/open?id=0B330vuSlEZmeMDdjNDBlNzktNjMzMS00ZDFkLTkzY2ItMWFiOWViMDQyMWM1
Thanks