What do you think of this crowdfunding pitch??

I'm after your brutal honest opinion of this crowdfunding pitch video. Did they do anything right? Did they do anything wrong?

I have nothing to do with this. I don't know them in any way. I am not asking you to donate or share.

http://www.pozible.com/project/197471

Their pitch video

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4akEcJw5TXg
 
It's too boring and it seems to ramble on, so it was difficult for me to understand what the movie was about. they need more cuts, different angles, maybe some b-roll of what they've done so far and some behind the scenes stuff.
 
Boring, amateurish, unengaging. Didn't come quickly enough to the point and even something as basic as 'what is it about?' elicited the initial answer... immmmmm....
 
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