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Wait - Daniel Radcliffe waits but what is approaching?

i would have like the U and N to run a bit together... it would have looked like the word "FLAW" as his head hides the rest of the word.

was the mirror going vert-hor-vert intentional?

Music and cutting worked for me... except for the "potshots" cutaway to the guy with the gun... seemed to forced

anyway... i hope DR doesn't go the way of Mackauly...
 
I think this guy just posts films he likes.

Personally, this one is a bit too hipster-ish for me, and I'm not sure I'd consider it a narrative.
 
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