archived-videos Upcoming Sci Fi (Hint: It's not aliens)

[Pendulym-BlindsideFilms]

This trailer actually was supposed to be a fake. As in, I never planned on making an actual series out of it, but my friends thought it looked cool, so my friends and I wrote up a script.

Long story short, the trailer is, in some cases, misleading.

Thanks for watching though.

TRAILER 1: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hE1ychY1pEw
TRAILER 2 (Actual Trailer) : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ksbjy78xLcM

Feedback is EXTREMELY APPRECIATED.

 

[DeJager]

I think the idea/concept is intriguing. The loud distorted noises in the second trailer make it very hard to watch the rest of the trailer, however I think there is a solution. I think the sound is "too loud and centered. If it's supposed to be sounds from the environment then they need to be thinned out and more filtered like a "background noise". Like if you were to hear them from off in the distance. That would add more depth. I don't think they are layered enough.

Sorry if I'm confusing you because I'm not sure how else to explain it! Haha.