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Unprotected Sex!!! 2 min extreme humour short.

I enjoyed the acting -- the doctor's dry comedic reactions worked very well. However, I felt like this set up a good premise only to fall a little short in the end.
 
Cheers for the reply John.

If I may be so bold, what was it that you felt let the film down? Do you think it's something that could be corrected/hidden in some way?
 
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