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archived-videos TONGUES - B-movie style short film!

Visuals all look pretty nice. Sound is decent, although I'm guessing you didn't record any location sound? That's a shame really - it feels like you're missing a scream from your protagonist as the corpse attacks. Also, I didn't quite get what was going on. Was she trying to force feed her the tongue? Why did she stick the tongue to the tree?

Good work!
 
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