thoughts on this teaser I filmed?

[RealJasonBourne]

I'll admit right off the bat, lighting is garbage, camera work could have been better.

What do you think of it as a whole piece (writing, etc)? Is it a little entertaining? It was made for this facebook group:

https://www.facebook.com/GetOnMyLvlGaming

 

[film_autre]

its only interesting when the stars and music kicks in, otehrwise camerwork was normal and sound was boring...

but thats just my opinion, its not terrible just nothing special about it... takes too long to get to the point.

 

[RealJasonBourne]

thanks. It's meant for kids to see so I don't know if maybe that's why its boring. My brother and I were already bashing it saying its garbage lmao and time to move onto the next project

 

[WalterB]

Rule one when presenting: don't start with excuses.

It's not as bad as you may want to make us think it is
For that group it may just be fine