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archived-videos Thirdreel - Short Film: The Fourth

I love it. Very funny. I laughed many times, and had a grin on my face through pretty much the entire thing. Terrific writing (I love that you stuck to a traditional 3-act arch). Excellent acting. Really nice cinematography. Edited well. Big thumbs up.

One thing -- not so much a criticism, but more of a curiosity. What's up with the 2.33:1? Why are people doing that? I think that format kind of needs a giant canvas to be effective. Ah, just my two cents.
 
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