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archived-videos There's Still a Chance? - Short film, Critique welcome!

EvolvingMind said:
Hey guys, here's a short film I made. I'd love to hear what you guys think of it. It's short! Enjoy!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MWQr5lc5gt0&list=HL1383010516&feature=mh_lolz
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Not bad. I liked the premise, some of the gags were OK and the timing wasn't bad. Bad bits were the middle went on for way too long. If I wear my 'viewer' hat, The dialogue lacked a lot in the middle and the sound was tinny (didn't sound real and was a bit distracting). Also, the visuals looked amateurish which detracted a bit.

Not a bad effort. I genuinely smiled a few times and wanted to know what happened in the end.
 
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