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archived-videos The View (2016) 3min thriller

Nice work!
For me just that dressing up with the suit was bit weird or like "whats going on" :-)

I like your transitions and the blurry effects are top!

Edit:
the audio for writing on the paper is to long.
At least it seems to me: he is standing up and the sound of writing paper is still on
 
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