The Search: Short Film (2 Pages)

[butterbescotch]

Hiya! Indies! Will you read this 2 page script I made? I don't really know how to write a script, so any suggestions is really welcome.

Here is the link: http://www.slideshare.net/butterbescotch/the-search-12194772

 

[amyuk]

Hi butter-be, the overall structure of the script is written correctly but you shouldn't keep putting camera shots and camera movements in the script. Is this just a practice script?ax
www.amyclarkefilms.com

 

[butterbescotch]

Thanks for the reply XD. What do you mean by "you shouldn't keep putting camera shots and camera movements in the script"? Where should I put them?

 

[PassionPulp]

for some reason it is frowned upon when you include camera shots in the screenplay.
Really, if you feel the need to, let's see it.
As long as it's your own personal project.
If you're planning to distribute it for production, it would not be advised to include camera shots.