My friend who helped me with The Rapture posted a small write up about his experience trying to 'fix' my script for the movie, it would give some insight on how he went about, this is one of the process we dealt with during the pre-production process, hammer the script to a point it's worth reading.
I hope you enjoy this. I did.
http://mdi-therapture.blogspot.com/
Please keep in mind, James is not a screenwriter, but more of a person who is looking at my story in the perspective as an audience who has no filmmaking or writing background. Obviously it helps me, in sense of connecting me with the general public, we often stays within our film community and forgets to step out of the box, and with his participation and many others, it helps 'ground' me.
That said, I would and he would agree, in NOT giving any first time reader the sooo much descriptive pages that we have, we did it cause it is OUR script, not something we are going OUT to proove to others or let others read.
The more well versed you are with sceenwriting, the least you need to describe every detail. I am sure Filmy and Clive would jump into this.
Again, take it as a reference to read upon, not as the 'must do' perspective.
J
I hope you enjoy this. I did.
http://mdi-therapture.blogspot.com/
Please keep in mind, James is not a screenwriter, but more of a person who is looking at my story in the perspective as an audience who has no filmmaking or writing background. Obviously it helps me, in sense of connecting me with the general public, we often stays within our film community and forgets to step out of the box, and with his participation and many others, it helps 'ground' me.
That said, I would and he would agree, in NOT giving any first time reader the sooo much descriptive pages that we have, we did it cause it is OUR script, not something we are going OUT to proove to others or let others read.
The more well versed you are with sceenwriting, the least you need to describe every detail. I am sure Filmy and Clive would jump into this.
Again, take it as a reference to read upon, not as the 'must do' perspective.
J
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