archived-videos The Poke Show: Things Jose Would Never Say.

Pink -- great idea, and some funny lines, but the constant cut back to the title card (with music) got to be a bit much. It was a humor momentum killer. I would have enjoyed it more if you just connected the jokes together so that you don't give the viewer a chance to stop chuckling. Build on the laughter.
 
Thanks for the feedback. We have a ton of these things, and there will be follow-ups. So the feedback helps a lot.

And speaking of that, anyone who has an opinion on these things we're doing, please don't hesitate to let me know -- I'm learning this as I go, and every comment helps.

Thanks again, John.
 
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