Tell me what you think. Feel free to be harsh, if I only wanted to hear 'thats great' I would just show it to my mom.
FADE IN:
EXT. EMPTY FIELD -- AFTERNOON
A silhoutte of a man stand hunched over something. The man is PRIVATE STEVEN THATCHER, an American soldier. Thatcher is a young man, around the age of 18.
P.O.V. THATCHER -- CONTINUOUS
Thatcher shakes PRIVATE ALLEN MILLS. Mills is a slightly older man, roughly 24 years of age. He is lifeless, but looks unharmed.
THATCHER
Mills!
Thatcher shakes Mills more.
THATCHER
Al! Wake up. You're the only person
(pauses and takes a breath)
THATCHER
Wake up Allen!
Thatcher gives one more shake. Mills' eyes open.
MILLS
Thatcher? Where-
Blood splatters all over Mills' face. Thatcher's body falls on top of Mills. More gun shots can be heard. Weeds and dirt fly everywhere.
Mills tries to wipe the blood off his face, but there is too much.
The bullets stop. Mills grabs Thatcher's gone and looks through the scope. He spots an elbow and fires.
P.O.V. SCOPE -- CONTINUOUS
The scope jolts up from the shot of the gun. Mills points the gun back to where the enemy troop was. A man holds his elbow. The scope points at the mans head and fires.
EXT. EMPTY FIELD -- CONTINUOUS
Mills drops the gun, and shakes Thatcher. Thatcher lets out a cough. He's been shot in the chest, and blood is coming out of his mouth.
MILLS
Thatcher!~ Stay with me man. I'm gonna---
More gun shots can be heard in the distance
MILLS
I'm gonna get you out of here Steve. Okay?
Thatcher nods his head. Mills drops the gun and picks up Thatcher, putting him over his shoulder. Thatcher coughs up more blood onto Mill's clothes. Mills picks up the gun with his other hand and heads off the other way.
CUT TO:
EXT. BOAT IN LAKE -- AFTERNOON
Mills stands on the pontoon using a towel and drying himself off. Thatcher is laying down.
MILLS
You put anymore thought about joining the army with me?
Thatcher looks at him.
THATCHER
Maybe.
Mills throws his towel on the ground.
MILLS
Come on Steve? You're gonna make me see the world all by myself?
CUT TO:
EXT. WOODED AREA -- NIGHT
Mills puts Thatcher up against a tree, sitting him up. Mills wipes the blood off of Thatcher's chin.
MILLS
There you go. You still with me Steve?
Thatcher nods.
THATCHER
Yeah.
Thatcher can hardly talk.
MILLS
I'm gonna get you some help. Okay? I'm gonna get you some help as soon as I find out where we are. Okay?
Thatcher nods.
Mills pulls out a canteen of water. He takes a drink.
MILLS
Here, take a sip of this.
Mills puts the canteen up to Thatcher's lips and give him some water. Some of the water drips down the side of his mouth.
Mills puts the cap on the canteen and puts it back on his belt(?). He surveys the surrounding area.
MILLS
I guess this is as good as place as any to rest.
Thatcher doesn't respond. Mills takes off his jacket and covers Thatcher with it.
MILLS
There you go. There you go, gotta keep you warm.
CUT TO:
INT. POKER ROOM -- EVENING
5 guys sit around a poker table. Cards in hand, chips spread around the table. Thatcher and Mills sit at opposite sides.
GUY 1
So I heard you signed up for the Army, Thatch
Thatcher laughs
THATCHER
Yeah, if Mills is stupid enough to join, I figured I might as well be there to watch him screw up.
They all laugh.
MILLS
Laugh it up, laugh it up. But when carrying your crying ass back to safety, we'll see who laughs last.
THATCHER
You carry me to safety? You can't even carry me across the room.
They all laugh again.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. WOODED AREA -- MORNING
The laughter ends. Birds chirp. The sun has shown itself.
Mills sleeps on the ground, Thatcher sleeps up against the tree, Mills jacket still covers him.
Mills' eyes open. He gets up, and quietly looks around. Everything is clear.
MILLS
Thatch, bro. We made it. A few more days and we should be fine.
Thatcher doesn't move.
MILLS
Steve?
Mills walks over to him. Thatcher doesn't move, he looks very pale.
MILLS
Steve? Wake up, we gotta start moving soon.
Thatcher is lifeless.
MILLS
We gotta start moving soon
Mills gets closer to Thatcher
MILLS
Thatch. Come on, we need to go.
Mills pushes Thatcher a little. Thatcher leans to the side. He's dead.
Mills grabs Thatcher's wrist and looks for a pulse. He cant find one. He grabs the other wrist. Nothing.
MILLS
Come on Steve. We gotta go.
An explosion is heard in the background. Mills picks Thatcher up and puts him over his shoulder again. Thatcher remains lifeless.
Mills begins heading away from the explosions. The more he walks, thecloser the sounds seem.
CUT TO:
EXT. FOLIAGE -- LATER
Mills puts Thatcher down in the tall weeds. Thatcher falls to theground lifeless. Mills takes out the last of his rations, and devoursit. He's starving. He looks around for something edible.
Mushrooms. He finds mushrooms on the edge of the tall weeds. Heclosely examines them. He picks one from the ground and brings it tohis eye. He blows on it, removing any dust or dirt. He bites into it, and eats the whole mushroom.
In a frenzy, he scoops up the rest of the mushrooms and puts them inhis mouth. He catches some of the pieces that escape his mouth.
MILLS
These are so good.
He looks around quickly for more, but he doesn't see any.Mills picks up his gun, and lifts Thatcher up over his shoulder. Hebegins walking again.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. WOODS -- EVENING
Thatcher lays on the ground, he looks as if he was jsut thrown down.Mills sits, gun ready, eyes wide open. He is sweating profusely.
THATCHER
I think I've been shot, Al
Mills looks over at Thatcher. Thatcher is sitting up examining thewhole in his jacket; where the bullet went through.
MILLS
I think you have been shot. But you done good, Steve.
Thatcher looks around, confused.
THATCHER
Where are we?
Mills looks away, surveying the land.
MILLS
I don't know. I'm just going as far away from the explosions as possible. I'm going to get us out of here.
Mills looks back, Thatcher is dead again, laying like he was earlier.Mills runs to him. Shaking him.
MILLS
Thatch? Thatcher! Wake up!
Thatcher is still lifeless. Mills straightens up. He falls asleep.
CUT TO:
EXT. WOODS -- MORNING
Mills wakes up and takes the last drink of his water, and puts Thatcher back no his shoulder. He throws the canteen on the ground.
The canteen drips the last drop of water into the soil.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. EMPTY FIELD -- LATER
Mills walks over a hill, unveiling a small patch of high weeds. 10 small children, dead, all dressed in white are spread across the field.
Mills drops Thatcher and runs over to closest one. The young child lays facing down. He turns her over, blood covers her face.
Mills begins stepping back quickly. He pukes.
MILLS
Oh my god.
Mills pukes again. He gasps for breath. Mills starts walking backwards, almost trips and turns around to grab Thatcher's body.
CUT TO:
EXT. WOODS -- EVENING
Mills grabs some leaves from a branch and shoves them in his mouth. Mills looks at Thatcher.
MILLS
Want some?
Thatcher is lifeless. Mills shoves the leaves he offered Thatcher into his mouth.
Mills takes off his jacket it and tosses it on the ground. He lays down to fall asleep.
CUT TO:
EXT. WOODED AREA (DREAM) -- EVENING
Tiny whispers of children can be heard. Mills eyes quickly open, he brings up his rifle. Thatcher is nowhere to be seen.
A small child from the field appears in his rifle's sight. The child is slowly walking towards him. Mills moves the rifle and looks for himself. All the children from the field are walking toward him slowly.
MILLS
Stop. Or I'll shoot.
The children keep coming closer. The whispering becomes louder.
MILLS
Don't think that I won't. I don't care if your children. Stop!
Mills looks back in the scope. He looks back up. Suddenly one of the children are right in front of him. He fires. Blood covers his face. Mills screams.
CUT TO:
EXT. WOODED AREA -- MORNING
Mills wakes up, covered in sweat. Thatcher lays where he was before. Birds chirp, nothing is out of place.
Mills lifts his head and yawns loudly. He looks over at Thatcher. Mills stands up. He starts walking towards Thatcher.
Machine gun fires. Mills drops to the ground next to Thatcher's corpse. Blood oozes from his shins. Mills screams and pains and grabs for his gun.
Another bullet hits his shoulder, and then his back.
Mills drops the gun. He looks at Thatcher's lifeless corpse.
MILLS
I'm sorry.
Mills gets shot again. Blood sprays across Thatcher.
The end
FADE IN:
EXT. EMPTY FIELD -- AFTERNOON
A silhoutte of a man stand hunched over something. The man is PRIVATE STEVEN THATCHER, an American soldier. Thatcher is a young man, around the age of 18.
P.O.V. THATCHER -- CONTINUOUS
Thatcher shakes PRIVATE ALLEN MILLS. Mills is a slightly older man, roughly 24 years of age. He is lifeless, but looks unharmed.
THATCHER
Mills!
Thatcher shakes Mills more.
THATCHER
Al! Wake up. You're the only person
(pauses and takes a breath)
THATCHER
Wake up Allen!
Thatcher gives one more shake. Mills' eyes open.
MILLS
Thatcher? Where-
Blood splatters all over Mills' face. Thatcher's body falls on top of Mills. More gun shots can be heard. Weeds and dirt fly everywhere.
Mills tries to wipe the blood off his face, but there is too much.
The bullets stop. Mills grabs Thatcher's gone and looks through the scope. He spots an elbow and fires.
P.O.V. SCOPE -- CONTINUOUS
The scope jolts up from the shot of the gun. Mills points the gun back to where the enemy troop was. A man holds his elbow. The scope points at the mans head and fires.
EXT. EMPTY FIELD -- CONTINUOUS
Mills drops the gun, and shakes Thatcher. Thatcher lets out a cough. He's been shot in the chest, and blood is coming out of his mouth.
MILLS
Thatcher!~ Stay with me man. I'm gonna---
More gun shots can be heard in the distance
MILLS
I'm gonna get you out of here Steve. Okay?
Thatcher nods his head. Mills drops the gun and picks up Thatcher, putting him over his shoulder. Thatcher coughs up more blood onto Mill's clothes. Mills picks up the gun with his other hand and heads off the other way.
CUT TO:
EXT. BOAT IN LAKE -- AFTERNOON
Mills stands on the pontoon using a towel and drying himself off. Thatcher is laying down.
MILLS
You put anymore thought about joining the army with me?
Thatcher looks at him.
THATCHER
Maybe.
Mills throws his towel on the ground.
MILLS
Come on Steve? You're gonna make me see the world all by myself?
CUT TO:
EXT. WOODED AREA -- NIGHT
Mills puts Thatcher up against a tree, sitting him up. Mills wipes the blood off of Thatcher's chin.
MILLS
There you go. You still with me Steve?
Thatcher nods.
THATCHER
Yeah.
Thatcher can hardly talk.
MILLS
I'm gonna get you some help. Okay? I'm gonna get you some help as soon as I find out where we are. Okay?
Thatcher nods.
Mills pulls out a canteen of water. He takes a drink.
MILLS
Here, take a sip of this.
Mills puts the canteen up to Thatcher's lips and give him some water. Some of the water drips down the side of his mouth.
Mills puts the cap on the canteen and puts it back on his belt(?). He surveys the surrounding area.
MILLS
I guess this is as good as place as any to rest.
Thatcher doesn't respond. Mills takes off his jacket and covers Thatcher with it.
MILLS
There you go. There you go, gotta keep you warm.
CUT TO:
INT. POKER ROOM -- EVENING
5 guys sit around a poker table. Cards in hand, chips spread around the table. Thatcher and Mills sit at opposite sides.
GUY 1
So I heard you signed up for the Army, Thatch
Thatcher laughs
THATCHER
Yeah, if Mills is stupid enough to join, I figured I might as well be there to watch him screw up.
They all laugh.
MILLS
Laugh it up, laugh it up. But when carrying your crying ass back to safety, we'll see who laughs last.
THATCHER
You carry me to safety? You can't even carry me across the room.
They all laugh again.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. WOODED AREA -- MORNING
The laughter ends. Birds chirp. The sun has shown itself.
Mills sleeps on the ground, Thatcher sleeps up against the tree, Mills jacket still covers him.
Mills' eyes open. He gets up, and quietly looks around. Everything is clear.
MILLS
Thatch, bro. We made it. A few more days and we should be fine.
Thatcher doesn't move.
MILLS
Steve?
Mills walks over to him. Thatcher doesn't move, he looks very pale.
MILLS
Steve? Wake up, we gotta start moving soon.
Thatcher is lifeless.
MILLS
We gotta start moving soon
Mills gets closer to Thatcher
MILLS
Thatch. Come on, we need to go.
Mills pushes Thatcher a little. Thatcher leans to the side. He's dead.
Mills grabs Thatcher's wrist and looks for a pulse. He cant find one. He grabs the other wrist. Nothing.
MILLS
Come on Steve. We gotta go.
An explosion is heard in the background. Mills picks Thatcher up and puts him over his shoulder again. Thatcher remains lifeless.
Mills begins heading away from the explosions. The more he walks, thecloser the sounds seem.
CUT TO:
EXT. FOLIAGE -- LATER
Mills puts Thatcher down in the tall weeds. Thatcher falls to theground lifeless. Mills takes out the last of his rations, and devoursit. He's starving. He looks around for something edible.
Mushrooms. He finds mushrooms on the edge of the tall weeds. Heclosely examines them. He picks one from the ground and brings it tohis eye. He blows on it, removing any dust or dirt. He bites into it, and eats the whole mushroom.
In a frenzy, he scoops up the rest of the mushrooms and puts them inhis mouth. He catches some of the pieces that escape his mouth.
MILLS
These are so good.
He looks around quickly for more, but he doesn't see any.Mills picks up his gun, and lifts Thatcher up over his shoulder. Hebegins walking again.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. WOODS -- EVENING
Thatcher lays on the ground, he looks as if he was jsut thrown down.Mills sits, gun ready, eyes wide open. He is sweating profusely.
THATCHER
I think I've been shot, Al
Mills looks over at Thatcher. Thatcher is sitting up examining thewhole in his jacket; where the bullet went through.
MILLS
I think you have been shot. But you done good, Steve.
Thatcher looks around, confused.
THATCHER
Where are we?
Mills looks away, surveying the land.
MILLS
I don't know. I'm just going as far away from the explosions as possible. I'm going to get us out of here.
Mills looks back, Thatcher is dead again, laying like he was earlier.Mills runs to him. Shaking him.
MILLS
Thatch? Thatcher! Wake up!
Thatcher is still lifeless. Mills straightens up. He falls asleep.
CUT TO:
EXT. WOODS -- MORNING
Mills wakes up and takes the last drink of his water, and puts Thatcher back no his shoulder. He throws the canteen on the ground.
The canteen drips the last drop of water into the soil.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. EMPTY FIELD -- LATER
Mills walks over a hill, unveiling a small patch of high weeds. 10 small children, dead, all dressed in white are spread across the field.
Mills drops Thatcher and runs over to closest one. The young child lays facing down. He turns her over, blood covers her face.
Mills begins stepping back quickly. He pukes.
MILLS
Oh my god.
Mills pukes again. He gasps for breath. Mills starts walking backwards, almost trips and turns around to grab Thatcher's body.
CUT TO:
EXT. WOODS -- EVENING
Mills grabs some leaves from a branch and shoves them in his mouth. Mills looks at Thatcher.
MILLS
Want some?
Thatcher is lifeless. Mills shoves the leaves he offered Thatcher into his mouth.
Mills takes off his jacket it and tosses it on the ground. He lays down to fall asleep.
CUT TO:
EXT. WOODED AREA (DREAM) -- EVENING
Tiny whispers of children can be heard. Mills eyes quickly open, he brings up his rifle. Thatcher is nowhere to be seen.
A small child from the field appears in his rifle's sight. The child is slowly walking towards him. Mills moves the rifle and looks for himself. All the children from the field are walking toward him slowly.
MILLS
Stop. Or I'll shoot.
The children keep coming closer. The whispering becomes louder.
MILLS
Don't think that I won't. I don't care if your children. Stop!
Mills looks back in the scope. He looks back up. Suddenly one of the children are right in front of him. He fires. Blood covers his face. Mills screams.
CUT TO:
EXT. WOODED AREA -- MORNING
Mills wakes up, covered in sweat. Thatcher lays where he was before. Birds chirp, nothing is out of place.
Mills lifts his head and yawns loudly. He looks over at Thatcher. Mills stands up. He starts walking towards Thatcher.
Machine gun fires. Mills drops to the ground next to Thatcher's corpse. Blood oozes from his shins. Mills screams and pains and grabs for his gun.
Another bullet hits his shoulder, and then his back.
Mills drops the gun. He looks at Thatcher's lifeless corpse.
MILLS
I'm sorry.
Mills gets shot again. Blood sprays across Thatcher.
The end