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An intriguing piece!

Shooting at night can be a double edged sword. The brilliance of some of the shots of light/dark was wonderful. The carousel and blinking lights and lights from the rides is very eye catching. The double edge part of it is that there were some shots which I couldn't see anything (might be my monitor too :) ). I like the blur to clear contrast, but it was done just a "tad" too much for me, and I was starting to get a headache after a bit-again that is possibly a personal taste.

Definitely had an eerie feeling to it, which seems to be what you were going for, it worked well!

It's definitely an attention getter! Well done!
 
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