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archived-videos TEACHERS PET (short student film)
- Thread starter tldavid
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I thought that was pretty damn good. A little shaky at the start but that changed very fast. And I DID laugh more than a few times. Nice job!
A good production, the acting was solid. Wish the ending was a little snappier, something more than "I'm sorry!". Maybe he could have said something pithy to the dog for wrecking his car, then drive away laughing like a schoolgirl. Or say something condescending about looking both ways before he crosses the street, I don't know. All in all some good stuff.
haha, good stuff man. Laughed quite a bit during this. The music was kinda dramatic at the end, but that contributed to the comedy, nice work!