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series SuperGiant Films new web series... please critique!

Hmmm, hard to tell from what I see. Looks like a comedy, but could be serious judging by the graphic.

I like the first shot, except I wish could see more of the guy being thrown out of the van. If it had just stopped a few feet back, it would have been perfect.

I did not like the nasty jump cut to get them to drive away. Maybe shoot a shot of the wheel of the car spinnning in the dirt and then come back to the guys in the car.

Scott
 
Agreed. Couldn't determine if I was supposed to be dramatically invested or laughing.

But, of course, it's a TEASER, so, **shrug**

The trunk gag was funny though.
 
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