archived-videos Slow Motion Film Challenge Short

[peter917]

This is my entry for Film Riot's Monday Challenge, which this week happened to be slow-motion. This is my first attempt at it and i had some warping problems due to the fact i didn't prepare for the shots before hand. Tell me what you think!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SS0V5U50eTE&feature=youtu.be

 

[WalterB]

The slowmo looks fine.
It seems you got better results with timewarping to slowmo than I ever got.
The first 8 or 9 seconds promise some kind of story: there is tension.
But the last shot doesn't really seem to be connected storywise.