watch Slapstick short movie

[moviemaker1992]

This is a slapstick me and my friends made , i worked a lot on the editing , please give some comments or tips ; So i can improve on making better movies


Here is the link to the youtube movie : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EnJnHXXwW9s

 

[PhantomScreenwriter]

What I liked about this is how random it was. I think the best part of this is when the three people are walking along side one another and they start pushing each other and the use of pinball machine-like sound effects was very effective.

As for the part in the bathroom while there were a couple of funny parts in that I think the later half of the video is the strongest overall. It would be funny to expand a bit on the idea of the characters pushing one another and the sound effects of a pinball machine whenever they hit things.

Overall it had me laughing which is huge plus

 

[HIFF]

The direct link:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EnJnHXXwW9s

 

[moviemaker1992]

What I liked about this is how random it was. I think the best part of this is when the three people are walking along side one another and they start pushing each other and the use of pinball machine-like sound effects was very effective.

As for the part in the bathroom while there were a couple of funny parts in that I think the later half of the video is the strongest overall. It would be funny to expand a bit on the idea of the characters pushing one another and the sound effects of a pinball machine whenever they hit things.

Overall it had me laughing which is huge plus

Thank you so much for this nice comment