First of all i would like to say hello to all of you. I’m glad to find these fórum. I’m Portuguese so sorry for some of my English and i would really you guys to take some of your time reading this. thanks
Here it goes:
I don’t know yet all the story. I know the end and maybe some of the beginning but the middle is a bit cloudy.
The story is about a man who has a rare condition ( he doesnt feel physical pain and never felt it). That makes him a bit cocky character who thinks he is some kind of super hero and consequently some problems like fights and things like that ( i’m thinking in someone like Tyler Durden character)
So he get into a trouble again but this time things really complicate and he has very little time to pay a gambling debt or he will get killed.
So it would start with some voice over ( dont now if character or narrator) to describe that character and a little of his life.
The story begins few days before the deadline for the debt be paid. He has knowledge of an illegal duel competition where the winner is the one who bear the pain for longer than the opponent. The winner prize is enough to pay the debt. ( By the way, he has a friend with a different personality and always tried to correct his friend behavior). He see this as a unique opportunity.
In the middle of the story (before the competition) I want to put something that will influence the end. So i tought in a man handing and putting out flyers in the street with a photograph of his daughter, asking for monetary help for a transplant, otherwise she dies.
In the end he win that duel and he give the money to that man. Maybe he take that decision based on something from his past that I dont know what yet ( can be shown in flashback) and also is one way to remedy all the mistakes he done in his life.
I know its all a bit cloudy but I hope you understand and give me your help and opinions please. Asking anything if you didn't understand something. Thank you.
Here it goes:
I don’t know yet all the story. I know the end and maybe some of the beginning but the middle is a bit cloudy.
The story is about a man who has a rare condition ( he doesnt feel physical pain and never felt it). That makes him a bit cocky character who thinks he is some kind of super hero and consequently some problems like fights and things like that ( i’m thinking in someone like Tyler Durden character)
So he get into a trouble again but this time things really complicate and he has very little time to pay a gambling debt or he will get killed.
So it would start with some voice over ( dont now if character or narrator) to describe that character and a little of his life.
The story begins few days before the deadline for the debt be paid. He has knowledge of an illegal duel competition where the winner is the one who bear the pain for longer than the opponent. The winner prize is enough to pay the debt. ( By the way, he has a friend with a different personality and always tried to correct his friend behavior). He see this as a unique opportunity.
In the middle of the story (before the competition) I want to put something that will influence the end. So i tought in a man handing and putting out flyers in the street with a photograph of his daughter, asking for monetary help for a transplant, otherwise she dies.
In the end he win that duel and he give the money to that man. Maybe he take that decision based on something from his past that I dont know what yet ( can be shown in flashback) and also is one way to remedy all the mistakes he done in his life.
I know its all a bit cloudy but I hope you understand and give me your help and opinions please. Asking anything if you didn't understand something. Thank you.
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