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While I'm not sure I buy the story, you got some good things going here.

The look and the music is good. However at 2:30 the music changed a bit and was distracting.

The beginning of the clip needs to move at a faster pace -- tighten it up there -- a lot or you'll lose some viewers.

Some of the scenes are too dark -- this can be fixed in post -- a good rule of thumb to use to fix this is to make sure the girl's white dress has the same amount of brightness in very clip.

Good luck.
 
Thanks for the feedback,

and I do agree with your points, for a 3min film the start does drag abit, I'm putting the couour changes down to the fact we shot over one day in November but by the time we were finishing it was just about pitch black, we have brought some better lights to hopefully stop that happening again,
I do hope you had chance to see the other two films.

Many Thanks
Daniel Ferguson



The Axe Murderer - Ferguson Films
 
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