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watch Short Film

It was competently filmed and creative.

I would like it if you took the concept to the next level.

The only part he's trying to do something in particular is with the girl, and that is too short of an episode. It could be restructured around going after the girl in all sorts of settings, milieus... but never able to seal the deal.
 
i liked it GOO9.

But i think you could have put him in a few more interesting situations. Like when he was on the road I was expecting maybe a truck would start heading straight for him.

Good idea and nicely shot.
 
Thank you for the kind replies guys!

I would have liked to further it more, but it was my 1st year uni project so I had little budget and time. I originally wanted him to appear on a train track, similar to what you suggested. Also the brief was for a 1 minute film, and as you can see I stretched that as much as I could already!

Thanks guys!!
 
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