archived-videos Short film trailer "Return"

[musefarm]

Hello everyone,
This is the trailer of my second short film "Return".I would like to have your feedback on the technical side of it.I'm sorry you wont get much of the idea or the story of the short film,as the titles and the words spoken are in Arabic.By the way,this is a trailer from Morocco.Your feedback is most welcome.


http://youtu.be/OsvPp-ET0ZU

 

[DreamLarge]

Hard to evaluate, since I didn't understand a word - (except, a film by mu.....)

Liked the mountain shot, the hugging shot, the guy on the ruin shot.

Can you post a translation for the Supers?

Cheers

DreamLarge

 

[justinisfilming]

In regards to the technical side, I'm really impressed! The visuals were great and sound was good as well. Good job and good luck with the film!

 

[AudioPostExpert]

Great images but you've got a serious problem or two with the sound. The most serious problem is that the first VO is very badly clipped/distorted and the second VO is EQ'ed and mixed poorly relative to the music and is difficult to hear clearly. The music also has a potential problem, the extreme amount of low frequency content, which could cause problems for those with a bass managed system or in a cinema (say at a film festival).

G