thanks
thanks so much for watching. I completely agree with yall. I have had a few people tell me the same thing about the title sequence. and I agree about the sounds as well. but like I said before, I wanted to focus more on the camera, story, and fx. I didnt really focus on sound that much. We did ADR for dialogue, but it didnt add anything to the short. So I decided to only have the sounds of the guns, and the "NO" at the end. Thanks for the complements on the camera work. As you could tell by the titles, it was me doing alot of the stuff, and some of my actors were doing double duty as well. I just didnt want to invest alot in this, because it was mainly a test. I know the plot may seem a bit to complex, but we have decided to make this into a 7 episode webseries. We have almost finished filming the next episode, and there will be better audio and foley...i hope...
but seriously thanks for watching and leaving your comments. It really means a lot
sean