Scene 1:streets
David (17) is walking in a fast pace as he sees a man following him, he quickly walks into an office slamming the door behind him.
(camera looks upwards at the office sign indicating its a therapist's office).
Scene 2: Therapist office
Dr. Jones
Can you remember anything from before the accident David?
David doesn't respond as his starring at a letter opener knife on the table.
DR. JONES
David,i know its hard but were not going to get anywhere if you don't talk to me.
DAVID
Hard? i felt nothing, i buried my brother and felt nothing
DR. JONES
It's alright David I'm here to help you. i want to try an activity with you; i need you to lie down. (David lies down). Now i want you close your eyes and just listen to my voice. Your name is David Renalds... you are 17 years old, your parents names are Joseph and Sarah Renalds... (His voice slowly drifts away).
(The camera pans David's body stopping at his neck)
Scene 3: Flashback
David has a flashback of him drowning a woman
Shot from David's point of view.
Scene 4: therapists office
David jumps up panicking
DR. JONES
What was it David, did you remember anything?
DAVID
A woman...
DR. JONES
What about a woman?
DAVID
I was drowning her...
David is trembling
Pause
DR. JONES
David calm down it’s alright; dreams like this are common after experiencing the trauma that you’ve endured. It’s likely to be your subconscious dealing with your unresolved emotions from your brother’s death.
David
No... Somethings wrong,i feel like I'm being watched. it's like I'm apart of someones twisted game… what if the crash wasn’t an accident; what if there was no crash.
Dr. Jones
you’re paranoid David, you hear what you want to hear and see what you want to see.
Dr. Jones writes in his note pad
DAVID
No, I'm not crazy
Dr. Jones writes in his note pad
Stop writing can you just stop, writing!
DR. JONES
It's alright David, your ill and you need help. I'm going to prescribe you medication to calm your nerves and eliminate your paranoia.
DAVID
No, you just want to drug me, your not even a real therapist.
David picks up the knife and stands up pacing
David
A therapist wouldn't have a knife out in the open when dealing with mentally unfit patients.
David holds the knife to the therapist neck and whispers
you did this to me, your in on it too, aren't you?!?!
DR. JONES
David I'm trying to help you
David searches Dr. Jones and finds a his phone that he throws against the wall, then he runs out of the office.
Scene 5: Streets
On the street David feels everyones eyes drawn to him, he also sees that a man is following him, he begins to run and the man follows.
Dr. Jones Narration
Your paranoid David you hear what you want to hear and see what you want to see.
David continues to run while ignoring the voices. He disappears around a corner and jumps out and stabs the man following him. David's shaking as he looks down at the body. He bends down and picks up a piece of paper and a pen.
Dr. Jones Narration
Your name is David Renalds, you are 19 years old, your parents names are Joseph and Sarah Renalds,you were inspired by your mother to act at an early age and now you are famous.
He drops to his knees and his eyes begin to water.
Scene 6: Flashback
David has a flashback of him drowning a woman
Director
CUT!!!
Thanks for last feedback helped heaps, love some more great ideas and soon hope to post the film.
David (17) is walking in a fast pace as he sees a man following him, he quickly walks into an office slamming the door behind him.
(camera looks upwards at the office sign indicating its a therapist's office).
Scene 2: Therapist office
Dr. Jones
Can you remember anything from before the accident David?
David doesn't respond as his starring at a letter opener knife on the table.
DR. JONES
David,i know its hard but were not going to get anywhere if you don't talk to me.
DAVID
Hard? i felt nothing, i buried my brother and felt nothing
DR. JONES
It's alright David I'm here to help you. i want to try an activity with you; i need you to lie down. (David lies down). Now i want you close your eyes and just listen to my voice. Your name is David Renalds... you are 17 years old, your parents names are Joseph and Sarah Renalds... (His voice slowly drifts away).
(The camera pans David's body stopping at his neck)
Scene 3: Flashback
David has a flashback of him drowning a woman
Shot from David's point of view.
Scene 4: therapists office
David jumps up panicking
DR. JONES
What was it David, did you remember anything?
DAVID
A woman...
DR. JONES
What about a woman?
DAVID
I was drowning her...
David is trembling
Pause
DR. JONES
David calm down it’s alright; dreams like this are common after experiencing the trauma that you’ve endured. It’s likely to be your subconscious dealing with your unresolved emotions from your brother’s death.
David
No... Somethings wrong,i feel like I'm being watched. it's like I'm apart of someones twisted game… what if the crash wasn’t an accident; what if there was no crash.
Dr. Jones
you’re paranoid David, you hear what you want to hear and see what you want to see.
Dr. Jones writes in his note pad
DAVID
No, I'm not crazy
Dr. Jones writes in his note pad
Stop writing can you just stop, writing!
DR. JONES
It's alright David, your ill and you need help. I'm going to prescribe you medication to calm your nerves and eliminate your paranoia.
DAVID
No, you just want to drug me, your not even a real therapist.
David picks up the knife and stands up pacing
David
A therapist wouldn't have a knife out in the open when dealing with mentally unfit patients.
David holds the knife to the therapist neck and whispers
you did this to me, your in on it too, aren't you?!?!
DR. JONES
David I'm trying to help you
David searches Dr. Jones and finds a his phone that he throws against the wall, then he runs out of the office.
Scene 5: Streets
On the street David feels everyones eyes drawn to him, he also sees that a man is following him, he begins to run and the man follows.
Dr. Jones Narration
Your paranoid David you hear what you want to hear and see what you want to see.
David continues to run while ignoring the voices. He disappears around a corner and jumps out and stabs the man following him. David's shaking as he looks down at the body. He bends down and picks up a piece of paper and a pen.
Dr. Jones Narration
Your name is David Renalds, you are 19 years old, your parents names are Joseph and Sarah Renalds,you were inspired by your mother to act at an early age and now you are famous.
He drops to his knees and his eyes begin to water.
Scene 6: Flashback
David has a flashback of him drowning a woman
Director
CUT!!!
Thanks for last feedback helped heaps, love some more great ideas and soon hope to post the film.
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