archived-videos Short depressing film about an lonely girl

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Hi There

I have recently finished a film about a girl struggling to cope with her ignorant husband which eventually drives her to breaking point. Compared to my other videos this is quite different as it is not intended to be funny as I wanted to try create a more serious piece of work. Tell me what you think whether it's bad or good all constructive comments welcome, all arrogant comments will be either deleted or met with un-relentless hostility. This was Created, Directed, Filmed and edited by myself and I also wrote the whole soundtrack for this one. I hope you enjoy this and if you want to see more there are more on my channel or at www.grape-productions.com

Cheers
Ben Daure

Just a note: The background TV noise is taken from BBC news 24 and Chris Morris' "JAM" Which everyone on the face of the earth should watch

Part 1 ---> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hhvG4olsWeI&feature=channel
Part 2 ---> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W90-1FZeszI
 
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Hey I liked it a lot, but there was some diction that needed work.
Other than that, you sure got the creepiness on me if that's what you intended.
I didn't really get the entire story though, not completely sure why the girl smiled at the end.
Did she kill the husband and frame it on her mother?
 
Thanks for the feedback it's much appreciated im really glad you enjoyed it. basically you got it right the girl had been telling the story all the way through and lied about what had happened, the is pretty open on whether she did it or she is just completely lying

If you liked that I recommend you watch my previous one, much more technical
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fbxh7UpOVnk
 
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