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archived-videos Seafood Tester| A short film by Darious J. Britt

Nice work! There are some great elements and ideas, but the pacing is slow, the camera movement was somewhat flawed, and the audio is a bit weak. It's not bad, but it could definitely been improved with some trimming and refinement. Also, best of luck with your film in the festival circuit. I'm really enjoying these tutorials, vlogs, and videos you have been doing. Keep up the good work.
 
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