This is a story on the online dating vs real dating.
(Guys please give me your useful comments on my story as i have been planning to take a movie of this story..)
Mathew a College Student comes pushing his bike.. Stops at a distance, sliding down the side stand of the bike park it in front of a building and sits over it, He picks up his phone and talks..
Mathew: Hey roger idiot, Your bike is of not use.. Instead of your bike pushing me, It made me to push it..
Roger: Hey forgot to say Mathew, my bike has engine trouble, give it for a service wen you return don’t mind. A friend in need is a friend in deed man..
Mathew: A friend in need is a friend indeed..arrgg.. not here I will cum there and take care
Of you..
Cuts the phone off and sits on the bike... Starts waiting for Marie jane there... its is a while now wen no 1 has come..
Mathew is now looking at the audience and asks
Mathew: You might be thinking for whom I might be waiting for Right!!!!
By this time the audience must have expected the answer that Mathew is waiting for a girl
Mathew: Yes you are correct I have been waiting for a girl.. Infact she has asked me for a
Meet here...
Again showing Mathew waiting.. for some shots and Again focusing on Mathew looking at audience.
Mathew: I think it will take time for her to come. By the time she comes.. I will tell you My story..
Mathew: Our friendship developed thru facebook only and more interesting thing is I
Don’t know her face..
Mathew: Anyways coming back to my story, (FLASHBACK with narration)It is has become a common thing to c a boy Having a girlfriend in my college…But I don’t know why even I talk to girls but I don’t have a girlfriend… I don’t know what’s wrong with me..
But tat day coming from college; quickly opened my Facebook, I was desperate and wanted to have a girlfriend soon after coming from my and sent a friend request to a girl named “Marie jane” in FB and I was surprised but happy to c the request was accepted by Marie jane at once. Soon he sends a message to Marie jane
Mathew: Hi thanks to accept my friend request
Marie jane: “”.
Mathew: Hi this is Mathew
Marie jane: Hi Mathew, I m Marie jane
Mathew: So hope to be nice friends from now on...
Marie jane: Ya sure..
Looking at Marie jane’s Friend’s and smile looking at her mutual friend Professor Gates
Mathew: Hey do you know Professor Gates, I just saw him in your Mutual Friends list
Mathew: I used to go to his tuitions when I was in Tenth.
Marie jane: Oh is it..
Marie jane: I was going to his Mathematics Tuitions , but now he has moved to
San francisco recently.
Marie jane: He is really a very good sir, Even though he is in San francisco now; he clarifies most of my doubts in mathematics thru FB, Special thanks to FB.
Mathew: (types He is really boring… sir but as soon as he checks her message he erases it and types) Ya he is really good sir, Without him I wouldn’t have passed my 10th exams you know...
This is how Mathew and Marie jane’s conversation’s on internet starts and in a few days they become good friends and keep chatting with each other daily evening after there college for a week. Everything goes fine for week, and next evening as usual Mathew comes from his college and throws of his bag on the bed and sits in front of the computer, in no time he goes to FB. Mathew looks at his profile to find an offline message for him from Marie jane which says
Mathew
“Hi Mathew, I am going to my grandparents place, My grandmother is sick and she wanted to see me and my parents, Pray for my grandmother to recover soon..”
(In this Mathew also has a roommate with him his name is “Ron”, he is a very take it easy guy)
Mathew looking through the message feels disappointed for not being able chat with Marie jane that day and not knowing how many days he has to wait. Thinking about this he drops himself in his bed and slowly sleeps. Ron looking at him asks him.
Ron: (Leaning on the bed, looking at Mathew holding a book)
Hey Mathew… What happened??
(Hits with the book on the legs of Mathew).
Mathew: (Speaks sadly)
She is going to her native place; uhhh….she will be not coming online for
Sometime..uff
Ron: (Smiles)
Ohh.. thu thu thu thu
Acts sadly making fun of his friend
Mathew: (Looks at Ron seriously)
Ron: (Stops laughing at him at once) Say’s
Oh Sorry Sorry.
Now Mathew as a daily routine used to come from college and quickly open fb, and eagerly checks whether Marie jane has cum online; but he gets depressed when she doesn’t come online. Just Expects Marie jane might drop any message for him.. All this process Ron keeps on looking.
Days pass from 3 to 5 to 15 to 20 to a Month
(Showing Mathew looking at the calendar day and night;
Walking on the lonely; thinking of her.)
Mathew comes to his room, changes his dress and sits on the bed tiredly holding 2 huge books on his hand to read..
Ron: (Working on computer) I came to your college to pick u up…Wer did you go?
Mathew: Went to roger’s house to get the project notes.
(Telling; he drop the books on the bed and si’ts to study)
Mathew opens his book to read
Tring tring!!!! Ron’s Phone rings
Ron: Hello Mummy…(Gets up from the system and goes to the other side of the room)
Acuth’s voice slowly gets low down when he goes a bit distance from the computer
Here Mathew not able to concentrate on it. He looks at his computer and asking himself,
Mathew: Should I check once???
Mathew: Hmmm...No!!!
Again looks at his book try concentrating, Turns slowly his head to the computer again
Slowly keeps his book aside looking at Ron busy with his phone and goes in front of the computer and quickly goes to his FB profile. His happiness had no limits when he sees a message from Marie jane atlast
Mathew: (Jumps atonce like a mad) AAyyeeee!!!!!
He shouted so loudly tat Ron who still talking with his parents suffered a sudden shock!!!
Ron Terrified by the shout; and almost drops his cell phone but safely catches it again.
Mathew Turns back and say’s
Mathew: Ron.. I got a message from Marie jane
Looking at the awkward position of Ron Asks.
Mathew: What happened? What kind of asana is this?
Ron: (With a stuttering or shivering voice)
Wat was that you... Did!!!? What happened?
Mathew: Marie jane has sent a message for me.
Ron: (Scolding Mathew in mind) Awesome dude…ahhh!!!!
Mathew looking at the computer happily; Ron gets up and looks at the computer
MESSAGE FROM MARIE JANE
“Hi Mathew, I have come back today, My grandmother got well soon in a week; My parents planned to return the very next day but my Grandmother wanted us to stay with her, Felt really bored all these days, No computer, no internet, no friends.. :-(, So wat did you do all these days..”
Marie jane comes online..
Marie jane: Hi Mathew, how r u
Mathew: Fine, just now saw your message..
Marie jane: Oh.
All these days both Marie jane had no pics of her uploaded on internet, No chatting for a month made Mathew curious to know how she looks.. He asks Marie jane
Mathew: Hey can I ask you a Question?
Marie jane: Ya..
Mathew: It’s been long since our friendship on internet but till now I haven’t seen your
Face. Y haven’t you uploaded a pic of ur.
Marie jane: Oh I am actually afraid of uploading my picture, Anyways I not tat beautiful
Though…lol
Marie jane: Even you haven’t uploaded your pictures na..!!!
Marie jane: Hey, Instead of uploading, Y doesn’t v Meet?
Mathew looking at the message is on shock!!! A girl asking for a meetup made him tensed? But soon he cools off and sends
Mathew: Ya sure... Tell me when and wer v can meet?
Marie jane: Coming Saturday, V shall meet at Professor Gates’s tuition at 5 o’clock?
Marie jane: I will directly come from my college there…Is it ok?
Mathew: Ya, not a Problem.
Marie jane: K den I have to go now, Bye
Mathew: K Bye..
Saying Mathew sign-out his Profile
Ron: Hey dude, have you said S!!! to that girl..?
Mathew: Hey Ron, Do you think Marie jane could turn out to be a beautiful?
Ron: No way dude!!!! Beauties never ever ask for a Blind date.. She should some kind of girl with so so looks only...
Mathew: (Mathew is in relief after hearing this and thinks wat Acuth says is correct, Marie jane should be of average looks only, thinks she can be a huge personality too without boyfriends.
Why Mathew is relieved because he was actually afraid whether the girl might be a beautiful, as he is afraid of talking with tat kind of girls face to face...)
Mathew: (He calls his friend roger) Hi roger, I need your brother’s bike on Saturday
Roger: Hey no way, he hardly gives to me..
Mathew: Hey don’t say like tat man..Please please ask your brother, I will bring it to you
Soon my work is over,
Roger: Hey for wat do you want man
Mathew: Hey life and death problem man, I will tell you later man
“A friend in need is a friend in deed man”
Roger: K k, come tat day I will keep it ready
Mathew: Thanks man..thanks a lot.
Roger: K k
Suddenly in this scene Mathew hears the silencer sound of a scooty.. which is awkward for the viewers but soon
Mathew: Do you hear some sound? (Thinking for a while…all of a sudden views at the audience and says)
Mathew: I think the Marie jane must have come
(BACK TO THE PRESENT)
Mathew looks at the scooty, Scooty stops at a Distance… Mathew saw a fatty girl named Gajalakshmi opening her helmet and looking at Mathew asks
Gajalakshmi: Hi, r u Mathew from FB?
Mathew with a relief yet disappointed turns his head other side and thinks
Mathew: What Acuth said was correct, beauties wont asks for a meet but Jumbos like her will ask… (Worried now)Oh my god how will I manage this huge personality now?
While he keeps thinking, Gajalakshmi again shouts
Gajalakshmi: Hey Mathew, wat r u thinking, Hi I am Marie jane..
Mathew again looks at her worriedly suddenly hear a voice from the back of Gajalakshmi, Its none other then Marie jane, Gajalakshmi was just pranking with him.
Marie jane gets down from scooty and slighting hitting Gajalakshmi
Marie jane: Hey enough of your Pranks Guddu, don’t frighten him up…
The expectations for Mathew had a gr8 twist as Marie jane turned out to be not only a beautiful girl but a killer girl with gorgeous looks and style..
This made Mathew heartbeat to hit Fast and is tensed now..
Lub…Dub…Lub…Dub
Every Step Marie jane comes near him made him more and more tensed and faster to fastest beating of his heart.
Lub Dub Lub Dub
LubDubLubDub Lub Dub Lub Dub
LDLDLDLDLDLDLDLD!!!!!!!
Marie jane comes near to him, Now Mathew is really very tensed..
Marie jane asks
Marie jane: Hi Mathew, sorry but I was little bit tenss!!!
Suddenly
Mathew: I have to go..Bye!!!!!
(Mathew quickly turns backs and runs but hits himself to the bike, Quickly gets up and try starts his bike but vein has the bike is not working.. But he doesn’t turn around for help but quickly takes his bikes and vanishes from the scene..)
Marie jane: (Showing to continue what she wanted to say) Tensed…(Now she is confused)
Gajalakshmi: What is this Marie jane, i taught only you to be a fool but he turned out to be your grandfather in fooliness.. (Looks at Marie jane for a while and holding her hand) K let us move now…
Both left the place..
In the room of Mathew, Mathew in front of computer waiting for Marie jane to come online, And Wen she comes online he quickly)
Mathew: Hey sry for wat all has happened.. You told you r not so looking.. I assumed you to be like tat…But when you turned out to be that gorgeous I was not able control my feelings and I was Became more tensed…
Marie jane: (Looking at the message starts to feeling Shy and smiles) lol.. k k…your actions
Wer worth watching that time he he he.. In fact I was also a bit tensed tat time.. But
Not as much as yours…he he
Mathew: (looks at the message and feels relieved) oh.. k k… I think v shall chat for while
den meeting…
Story ends here by showing Ron telling Audience tat
Ron: This is the reason why He doesn’t have a Girlfriend!!!!!
THE END
(Guys please give me your useful comments on my story as i have been planning to take a movie of this story..)
Mathew a College Student comes pushing his bike.. Stops at a distance, sliding down the side stand of the bike park it in front of a building and sits over it, He picks up his phone and talks..
Mathew: Hey roger idiot, Your bike is of not use.. Instead of your bike pushing me, It made me to push it..
Roger: Hey forgot to say Mathew, my bike has engine trouble, give it for a service wen you return don’t mind. A friend in need is a friend in deed man..
Mathew: A friend in need is a friend indeed..arrgg.. not here I will cum there and take care
Of you..
Cuts the phone off and sits on the bike... Starts waiting for Marie jane there... its is a while now wen no 1 has come..
Mathew is now looking at the audience and asks
Mathew: You might be thinking for whom I might be waiting for Right!!!!
By this time the audience must have expected the answer that Mathew is waiting for a girl
Mathew: Yes you are correct I have been waiting for a girl.. Infact she has asked me for a
Meet here...
Again showing Mathew waiting.. for some shots and Again focusing on Mathew looking at audience.
Mathew: I think it will take time for her to come. By the time she comes.. I will tell you My story..
Mathew: Our friendship developed thru facebook only and more interesting thing is I
Don’t know her face..
Mathew: Anyways coming back to my story, (FLASHBACK with narration)It is has become a common thing to c a boy Having a girlfriend in my college…But I don’t know why even I talk to girls but I don’t have a girlfriend… I don’t know what’s wrong with me..
But tat day coming from college; quickly opened my Facebook, I was desperate and wanted to have a girlfriend soon after coming from my and sent a friend request to a girl named “Marie jane” in FB and I was surprised but happy to c the request was accepted by Marie jane at once. Soon he sends a message to Marie jane
Mathew: Hi thanks to accept my friend request
Marie jane: “”.
Mathew: Hi this is Mathew
Marie jane: Hi Mathew, I m Marie jane
Mathew: So hope to be nice friends from now on...
Marie jane: Ya sure..
Looking at Marie jane’s Friend’s and smile looking at her mutual friend Professor Gates
Mathew: Hey do you know Professor Gates, I just saw him in your Mutual Friends list
Mathew: I used to go to his tuitions when I was in Tenth.
Marie jane: Oh is it..
Marie jane: I was going to his Mathematics Tuitions , but now he has moved to
San francisco recently.
Marie jane: He is really a very good sir, Even though he is in San francisco now; he clarifies most of my doubts in mathematics thru FB, Special thanks to FB.
Mathew: (types He is really boring… sir but as soon as he checks her message he erases it and types) Ya he is really good sir, Without him I wouldn’t have passed my 10th exams you know...
This is how Mathew and Marie jane’s conversation’s on internet starts and in a few days they become good friends and keep chatting with each other daily evening after there college for a week. Everything goes fine for week, and next evening as usual Mathew comes from his college and throws of his bag on the bed and sits in front of the computer, in no time he goes to FB. Mathew looks at his profile to find an offline message for him from Marie jane which says
Mathew
“Hi Mathew, I am going to my grandparents place, My grandmother is sick and she wanted to see me and my parents, Pray for my grandmother to recover soon..”
(In this Mathew also has a roommate with him his name is “Ron”, he is a very take it easy guy)
Mathew looking through the message feels disappointed for not being able chat with Marie jane that day and not knowing how many days he has to wait. Thinking about this he drops himself in his bed and slowly sleeps. Ron looking at him asks him.
Ron: (Leaning on the bed, looking at Mathew holding a book)
Hey Mathew… What happened??
(Hits with the book on the legs of Mathew).
Mathew: (Speaks sadly)
She is going to her native place; uhhh….she will be not coming online for
Sometime..uff
Ron: (Smiles)
Ohh.. thu thu thu thu
Acts sadly making fun of his friend
Mathew: (Looks at Ron seriously)
Ron: (Stops laughing at him at once) Say’s
Oh Sorry Sorry.
Now Mathew as a daily routine used to come from college and quickly open fb, and eagerly checks whether Marie jane has cum online; but he gets depressed when she doesn’t come online. Just Expects Marie jane might drop any message for him.. All this process Ron keeps on looking.
Days pass from 3 to 5 to 15 to 20 to a Month
(Showing Mathew looking at the calendar day and night;
Walking on the lonely; thinking of her.)
Mathew comes to his room, changes his dress and sits on the bed tiredly holding 2 huge books on his hand to read..
Ron: (Working on computer) I came to your college to pick u up…Wer did you go?
Mathew: Went to roger’s house to get the project notes.
(Telling; he drop the books on the bed and si’ts to study)
Mathew opens his book to read
Tring tring!!!! Ron’s Phone rings
Ron: Hello Mummy…(Gets up from the system and goes to the other side of the room)
Acuth’s voice slowly gets low down when he goes a bit distance from the computer
Here Mathew not able to concentrate on it. He looks at his computer and asking himself,
Mathew: Should I check once???
Mathew: Hmmm...No!!!
Again looks at his book try concentrating, Turns slowly his head to the computer again
Slowly keeps his book aside looking at Ron busy with his phone and goes in front of the computer and quickly goes to his FB profile. His happiness had no limits when he sees a message from Marie jane atlast
Mathew: (Jumps atonce like a mad) AAyyeeee!!!!!
He shouted so loudly tat Ron who still talking with his parents suffered a sudden shock!!!
Ron Terrified by the shout; and almost drops his cell phone but safely catches it again.
Mathew Turns back and say’s
Mathew: Ron.. I got a message from Marie jane
Looking at the awkward position of Ron Asks.
Mathew: What happened? What kind of asana is this?
Ron: (With a stuttering or shivering voice)
Wat was that you... Did!!!? What happened?
Mathew: Marie jane has sent a message for me.
Ron: (Scolding Mathew in mind) Awesome dude…ahhh!!!!
Mathew looking at the computer happily; Ron gets up and looks at the computer
MESSAGE FROM MARIE JANE
“Hi Mathew, I have come back today, My grandmother got well soon in a week; My parents planned to return the very next day but my Grandmother wanted us to stay with her, Felt really bored all these days, No computer, no internet, no friends.. :-(, So wat did you do all these days..”
Marie jane comes online..
Marie jane: Hi Mathew, how r u
Mathew: Fine, just now saw your message..
Marie jane: Oh.
All these days both Marie jane had no pics of her uploaded on internet, No chatting for a month made Mathew curious to know how she looks.. He asks Marie jane
Mathew: Hey can I ask you a Question?
Marie jane: Ya..
Mathew: It’s been long since our friendship on internet but till now I haven’t seen your
Face. Y haven’t you uploaded a pic of ur.
Marie jane: Oh I am actually afraid of uploading my picture, Anyways I not tat beautiful
Though…lol
Marie jane: Even you haven’t uploaded your pictures na..!!!
Marie jane: Hey, Instead of uploading, Y doesn’t v Meet?
Mathew looking at the message is on shock!!! A girl asking for a meetup made him tensed? But soon he cools off and sends
Mathew: Ya sure... Tell me when and wer v can meet?
Marie jane: Coming Saturday, V shall meet at Professor Gates’s tuition at 5 o’clock?
Marie jane: I will directly come from my college there…Is it ok?
Mathew: Ya, not a Problem.
Marie jane: K den I have to go now, Bye
Mathew: K Bye..
Saying Mathew sign-out his Profile
Ron: Hey dude, have you said S!!! to that girl..?
Mathew: Hey Ron, Do you think Marie jane could turn out to be a beautiful?
Ron: No way dude!!!! Beauties never ever ask for a Blind date.. She should some kind of girl with so so looks only...
Mathew: (Mathew is in relief after hearing this and thinks wat Acuth says is correct, Marie jane should be of average looks only, thinks she can be a huge personality too without boyfriends.
Why Mathew is relieved because he was actually afraid whether the girl might be a beautiful, as he is afraid of talking with tat kind of girls face to face...)
Mathew: (He calls his friend roger) Hi roger, I need your brother’s bike on Saturday
Roger: Hey no way, he hardly gives to me..
Mathew: Hey don’t say like tat man..Please please ask your brother, I will bring it to you
Soon my work is over,
Roger: Hey for wat do you want man
Mathew: Hey life and death problem man, I will tell you later man
“A friend in need is a friend in deed man”
Roger: K k, come tat day I will keep it ready
Mathew: Thanks man..thanks a lot.
Roger: K k
Suddenly in this scene Mathew hears the silencer sound of a scooty.. which is awkward for the viewers but soon
Mathew: Do you hear some sound? (Thinking for a while…all of a sudden views at the audience and says)
Mathew: I think the Marie jane must have come
(BACK TO THE PRESENT)
Mathew looks at the scooty, Scooty stops at a Distance… Mathew saw a fatty girl named Gajalakshmi opening her helmet and looking at Mathew asks
Gajalakshmi: Hi, r u Mathew from FB?
Mathew with a relief yet disappointed turns his head other side and thinks
Mathew: What Acuth said was correct, beauties wont asks for a meet but Jumbos like her will ask… (Worried now)Oh my god how will I manage this huge personality now?
While he keeps thinking, Gajalakshmi again shouts
Gajalakshmi: Hey Mathew, wat r u thinking, Hi I am Marie jane..
Mathew again looks at her worriedly suddenly hear a voice from the back of Gajalakshmi, Its none other then Marie jane, Gajalakshmi was just pranking with him.
Marie jane gets down from scooty and slighting hitting Gajalakshmi
Marie jane: Hey enough of your Pranks Guddu, don’t frighten him up…
The expectations for Mathew had a gr8 twist as Marie jane turned out to be not only a beautiful girl but a killer girl with gorgeous looks and style..
This made Mathew heartbeat to hit Fast and is tensed now..
Lub…Dub…Lub…Dub
Every Step Marie jane comes near him made him more and more tensed and faster to fastest beating of his heart.
Lub Dub Lub Dub
LubDubLubDub Lub Dub Lub Dub
LDLDLDLDLDLDLDLD!!!!!!!
Marie jane comes near to him, Now Mathew is really very tensed..
Marie jane asks
Marie jane: Hi Mathew, sorry but I was little bit tenss!!!
Suddenly
Mathew: I have to go..Bye!!!!!
(Mathew quickly turns backs and runs but hits himself to the bike, Quickly gets up and try starts his bike but vein has the bike is not working.. But he doesn’t turn around for help but quickly takes his bikes and vanishes from the scene..)
Marie jane: (Showing to continue what she wanted to say) Tensed…(Now she is confused)
Gajalakshmi: What is this Marie jane, i taught only you to be a fool but he turned out to be your grandfather in fooliness.. (Looks at Marie jane for a while and holding her hand) K let us move now…
Both left the place..
In the room of Mathew, Mathew in front of computer waiting for Marie jane to come online, And Wen she comes online he quickly)
Mathew: Hey sry for wat all has happened.. You told you r not so looking.. I assumed you to be like tat…But when you turned out to be that gorgeous I was not able control my feelings and I was Became more tensed…
Marie jane: (Looking at the message starts to feeling Shy and smiles) lol.. k k…your actions
Wer worth watching that time he he he.. In fact I was also a bit tensed tat time.. But
Not as much as yours…he he
Mathew: (looks at the message and feels relieved) oh.. k k… I think v shall chat for while
den meeting…
Story ends here by showing Ron telling Audience tat
Ron: This is the reason why He doesn’t have a Girlfriend!!!!!
THE END