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archived-videos RPS Games' Linerunner (Live-action commerical)

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KimBrarud

Hey filmfolks!

RPS Games recently asked me if I was interested to make a short commercial for their upcoming game "Linerunner" (of course i said yes!)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z_Wy5pXNCSs&list=UUb74jHAJIbShE5iLI7uGaJA&index=1&feature=plcp

The story in the commercial is based on the concept of the game: A (crazy) artist who wants to erase his work and start from scratch.
You are one of his last drawings and your only way to survive is to escape the mad man and his deadly eraser!



I am interested in what you think, please give me some (critic) feedback!

P.S: Also, if you notice in the outdoor scenes, it almost looks like if the boy runs in fast film. I did not increase the speed of the clip but somehow it automatically looks like he's running in fast film. I happen each time i export the video, but it does not occur in the editing window. I'm using Final Cut Express!

And yes, my english is...norwegianised.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z_Wy5pXNCSs&list=UUb74jHAJIbShE5iLI7uGaJA&index=1&feature=plcp
 
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First thing I would suggest is changing the music.
It's pretty generic stuff anyway so I think you could replace it with some free/commercial free stuff (http://freeplaymusic.com/)

It's certainly very different for a video game trailer - and it's only at the end that you figure it out.
Maybe add something at the start so people know straight away that it's got to do with a game.

But apart from that, I can't wait to see how they go.
 
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