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Quiltom

Heres a glimpse of my upcoming movie * RAIN* based on a criminal undergoing a psychological urge to quit his evil deeds , He wants to suicide but as the movie goes on his feelings change ...
So anyways guys btw i'm a 16 yr old and the music is also mine XD
Gimme reviews , Hit the like button if you actually like it or dislike it if you don't :P
Advices and criticism is welcomed by me , So anyway here it is
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A_UyGJgKFJk&list=UU8S2qJKtr-LTpdmpQMI0c-Q&index=1&feature=plcp
 
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Quiltom said:
Heres a glimpse of my upcoming movie * RAIN* based on a criminal undergoing a psychological urge to quit his evil deeds , He wants to suicide but as the movie goes on his feelings change ...
So anyways guys btw i'm a 16 yr old and the music is also mine XD
Gimme reviews , Hit the like button if you actually like it or dislike it if you don't :P
Advices and criticism is welcomed by me , So anyway here it is
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A_UyGJgKFJk&list=UU8S2qJKtr-LTpdmpQMI0c-Q&index=1&feature=plcp
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Good job on the effects. Did you create the Ferrari as well?
Your rain does seem a little too angled, looks like its being sprayed from the side. Try straightening it out a little more for your film might look more realistic.

I also used a lot of rain in my short 'After The Rain'. hope it inspires you.. https://vimeo.com/40104084

Good luck finishing up your film!
 
Hmm , Thanks ! I'll try making the rain straight and haha That Ferrari was a miniature , I actually tied it with a rope and made it do this , You don't wanna see the orginal video XD anyway Thanks man I'll definitely check your film out
Good job on the effects. Did you create the Ferrari as well?
Your rain does seem a little too angled, looks like its being sprayed from the side. Try straightening it out a little more for your film might look more realistic.

I also used a lot of rain in my short 'After The Rain'. hope it inspires you.. https://vimeo.com/40104084

Good luck finishing up your film!
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Haha really? Great job on the color corrections then! maybe try slowing it down a bit as it does move in a little lightly.
 
I looks pretty cool so far. First thing I noticed is that the text is way too big. Look at some other professional trailers and compare size. The end title showing Rain looked good to me.

The film footage looked real good to me. I did not get much idea what this movie was about from the video though.
 
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