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archived-videos Ping-Pong Master Trailer

I'm assuming it's a short, right? Anyhow I always think it's best to show multiple locations in a trailer, to give your film 'scope'...

The first time we hear dialogue, it's too quiet.

Other than it was ok! Very 'Balls of Fury' :D
 
Thanks for the reply and yes it is a short. I've tried and failed several times trying to do feature lengths (dumb idea) and have decided to narrow my scope, which I kinda hate doing. Yes, there will be another trailer with more 'scope'. I'm hoping to publish it this week. Thanks, I'll boost up the dialogue.
 
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