Hi all,
I need some help with rewrite.
If you say, I need to focus on dialogue, my problem is I’m a English second language guy so I’m pretty much helpless.
If you say my script needs focus. I understand that I have established a plot and then put the lead in situation that dilutes the established plot.
For one of my scripts a dev. exec suggested the changes in the story. I tired to do it but was blocked completely because I feared of a plot hole that might be created in the process of making the changes she wanted.
Any help is appreciated,
Thanks in advance,
Ace.Inc1
I need some help with rewrite.
If you say, I need to focus on dialogue, my problem is I’m a English second language guy so I’m pretty much helpless.
If you say my script needs focus. I understand that I have established a plot and then put the lead in situation that dilutes the established plot.
For one of my scripts a dev. exec suggested the changes in the story. I tired to do it but was blocked completely because I feared of a plot hole that might be created in the process of making the changes she wanted.
Any help is appreciated,
Thanks in advance,
Ace.Inc1