Obscurity - An Animated Graphic Novel

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Obscurity is a half life 2 graphic animation novel that is released in chapters. It is quite hard to explain the story in a lot of detail as it will ruin the plots turning points, however i can tell you this it revolves around an unconfident man named Daniel Harries who has a tragic past he just cant forget about. On december the 31st 1999 Dan is on his way home when he gets caught in the middle of an event that will lead him into a world of love, guilt and deceit. Can he stop the man responsible for all this or will he lose to an even more intimidating enemy. Himself.

You can find more info on the series at www.cjworkshop.co.uk


Trailer
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9SdQlYnPAe0



Chapter One - My Real Heroic Dream

Part 1
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bb9A8_nh03Q&feature=related


Part 2
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cuAR91Wp9jo&feature=related
 
I think it's a fun use of Halflife 2's 'Gary's Mod'...

I think some of your shots are cool, and some of your camera moves are nice--even considering the shotty mouse-look system you're dealing with while controlling the camera.

I think the voice acting isn't bad for an animated series...some of it is good.

I think what is the weakest part is the editing and story. A lot of work needs to go into a good story. It feels like you're rushing to make cool stuff happen with the Halflife engine, and you're skimming over the story...

Good luck with this kind of thing in the future.
 
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