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Hey guys I'm working on a new scipted called "The Female Heist"

Synopsis

A young girl growing up without her parents due to unnecessary deaths is forced to live with her sister as both of them struggles through the challenges of life. The girl diverts to stealing to survive and eventually gets caught and sentence to two years in women correction prison. In there she understands more about life and learns how to be strong and how to defend herself and she gets bullied while in prison. The two years were up and she is reunited with her sister and at the same night her sister gets robbed and gun down so now she's all alone in a cruel world. Later on in life as she struggles she joins a mob which her position is to steal jewelry and valuable stuff for the mob leader for him to sell to buyers, that's how she earns her living but then later on she realise that the mob that she is working for includes the person that killed her sister those years ago.
 
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It could be interesting. This is a story that you want to really take the time to develop. Get all of the back story and character details and and plot points worked out before you start writing. Also, if it is going to include a prison, research the realities of female prison to avoid cliches or just blatant inaccuracy.

I also would refrain from her joining a "mob". Her joining an actual "mob" is very unlikely (because she is a female and depending on what ethnicity the mob was, she is most likely not Italian). I would maybe go with a common street gang.

As for the twist at the end, be careful with it. If it isn't presented tactfully it will end up being very cheesy.
Good luck!
 
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