The day for night didn't work for me. Next time, don't show the sky. Or shoot it at night. You could also single out the sky, and do a color correction on it. I don't really understand the point of this teaser. It doesn't tell us much about the film, and it doesn't make me want to see it. I know that it's about taking a shortcut home. That's it. The title says as much as the teaser does. It felt like you went outside with a camera, and walked around. Then you threw some color correction, titles, and music on quickly, and posted it on youtube. I hope the film turns out well, but I am not fond of the teaser.