I feel it could've been executed better.
The music was on spot. Composition was not. The scene with the girl trying to escape the cuffs, I wanted to see close ups of what she was trying to do, not just a long one shot of her trying all this different stuff. And that was throughout the video. There was a lot of times when the music would pick up on a cue and there wasn't any shot change, nothing that made me go "oh no!"
But what you did do good was experiment with an idea. That's the best way to hone your craft. It was good that you had talent that put forth effort (especially if this had no budget towards that). Also audio was spotty. I could hardly hear sometimes. If you don't have access to the type of equipment that is needed, that's all understandable, just keep trying to make the perfect piece that you can with what you have.
I also like your logo animation.
